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26 Jul 2012, 2:16 am

Here, I write a suggestion(similar to a prompt) for a fan fiction plot that I came up with. After one has been done, I create another, and so on. Interested? If so, I will start the first few.

Harry Potter:Voldemort is traveling through Russia during the time the audience didn't see him, and comes across a Russian Military Base.

Star Trek:During a mission, a lieutenant called Mary Sue falls into the Warp Core and dies a very painful, excruciating death.

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I think I will write one more suggestion:

Redwall: Takes place 250 years after the events of Rouge Crew(the last book in the series) ensuring that this will only have original characters. The protagonist is white vixen comes to Mossflower, carrying two flintlock pistols(DO not refer to them that directly; describe the weapons like a person who has never seen one would{e.g. a hare of the Long Patrol or a resident of Redwall Abbey}), a sword, and a bow with twelve arrows. An army of mice(to make the Redwall stories more grey with races) are invading Salmandastron.


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26 Jul 2012, 7:57 am

The Voldemort one sounds interesting. How would the Russian base be affected by him visiting it (and vice versa)?

Is the Mary Sue in your second idea a typical Mary Sue (ie too perfect, has the wrong effect on the readers) or is she just an ordinary person who is very unlucky? Maybe you could try to make the readers care about her without making her amazing at everything she does.



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26 Jul 2012, 9:47 am

DominictheStampede wrote:
The Voldemort one sounds interesting. How would the Russian base be affected by him visiting it (and vice versa)?

Is the Mary Sue in your second idea a typical Mary Sue (ie too perfect, has the wrong effect on the readers) or is she just an ordinary person who is very unlucky? Maybe you could try to make the readers care about her without making her amazing at everything she does.


I think the point is for us to be glad that Mary Sue dies.


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26 Jul 2012, 2:51 pm

Ganondox wrote:
DominictheStampede wrote:
The Voldemort one sounds interesting. How would the Russian base be affected by him visiting it (and vice versa)?

Is the Mary Sue in your second idea a typical Mary Sue (ie too perfect, has the wrong effect on the readers) or is she just an ordinary person who is very unlucky? Maybe you could try to make the readers care about her without making her amazing at everything she does.


I think the point is for us to be glad that Mary Sue dies.


Correct. The character is a Parody Sue that gets killed almost immediately after coming aboard in the way I described. Click here to see what I mean.

Also, the second one is suppose to be Comedy, if you didn't know.


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26 Jul 2012, 3:11 pm

Sorry for the misunderstanding :oops: I wondered if it was comedy or not. I once read a Classic Thundercats Mary Sue Parody Fic in which Mumm-Ra summons Mary Sue and Gary Stu to get rid of the Thundercats. It was really funny. Good luck with your writing and PM me if you need someone to read your fics/bounce ideas off :)



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26 Jul 2012, 3:52 pm

Actually, I only make the basic idea. I let others decide what they want to do with it.

Example: Fred sees one of the ideas and likes it. Then he writes the fan fic and PMs me that he has. Then it continues. As I said, it is like a prompt. Just take the basic idea and go off with it. Understand now?


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29 Jul 2012, 5:29 pm

Also, alert me if you want to use one of my plot suggestions.


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05 Aug 2012, 4:40 pm

Hmmm. That's strange. No one has taken my ideas. I thought that Star Trek and Harry Potter were the most popular fandoms. Must be mistaken.


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