Writing?

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I like to write here and there but I have no confidence. I wrote this today and I don't have anywhere to put it. I figured here is a good place for now.

I have disappeared. All that I knew means nothing. My mind is wandering the universe trying to figure it out. It's cold and it's dark here. Do you like it? Living in reality never meant much to you but it's everything to me. I look through every window - I look at every detail. You can't hide from me. I am everything that scares you. It's cold and it's dark here in reality.

I am electric. I am the android they warned you about. Cold stare, frozen heart. I seek truth. You seek delusion. I seek knowledge. You seek comfort. Misanthropic hearts skip a beat. Robotic thoughts for a new future. A future thought. A thought of the future.

In my dreams I'm there. I'm everywhere I've never been and I'm free.

I really liked the "I am the Android they warned you about." Is this poetry, or rather whimsical openings to fiction?
As a writer myself, I can fully understand a lack of confidence in one's own fiction - despite the fact that my wife tells me that what I write is good. She's my wife - what's she supposed to do, tell me it's terrible?

-Bill, otherwise known as Kraichgauer

My mom could probably tell good fiction. Or spot the one tinsy spelling mistake. Say something doesn't make any sense.
Whatever.

But that's what I like. I'll be having her examining my book when I am ready for it to be.
Part of me worries I'm trying to sasify her- but no- I'm just trying to help her understand it.