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Shizz
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23 Jan 2013, 11:13 pm

I've climbed through the net and went down a hole
Entangled my soul with disinformation
Searching for clues or answers to riddles
Researched the circles of truth seeker claims
Nearly devoured, I barely escaped
Out from his mouth I flew in full view
Look at my wings, they glow in the moon
Touch me and watch we slowly fall down
Walk away fast, let's fall back asleep
To the end, the Apocalyptic Dream
Regeneration begins at conception
Build our ideals in sun soaked remains
String back the threads for another brand new game



redrobin62
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24 Jan 2013, 12:03 am

Shizz
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24 Jan 2013, 12:24 am

Thank you. :)

Wanna add to it? I like interactive poetry. 8)



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24 Jan 2013, 11:31 am

i'm not a poet...so i don't really grasp the whole ....poetic rhythm. so here is my attempt.

As I start a new this retinue
I retrieve the few that can view
these glorious clues that bring us to
a new location upon this plain
an existence that we newly gained
how to achieve our group now gleans
Curiosity is the new theme
we search through these new circles
dancing past the previous apocalyptic dream
into a new fantastical stream
yet as we continue down past
we return to sleep to end this wondrous dream


posting apologies ahead...



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24 Jan 2013, 7:24 pm

Now it just needs some Metal.


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24 Jan 2013, 11:22 pm

Behind the veil of the everyday
vibrant colors swirl in four dimensions
Hypnotic and pleasing they are
To the gaze of one who stumbles in
At night there is a symphony
Of starlight, scarlet, green, and brass
Where golden faces make their display
And the clarion trumpet calls the hour
The bright and silver sound of which
Bring workers of light to cheer and song
And they gaze fondly at earthly mirrors
Who waltz in hidden masquerade ball