3 of my poems

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14 May 2013, 7:09 pm

1.
OLD AGE
Everyone vanished
Their replacements
Don't fool me!
2.
God
Reality is God's face
Words are sticky notes
Who can resist?
3.
Whenever I understand
My life
I smirk
Like a dying man
Hearing his nurse's absurd gossip.

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14 May 2013, 7:55 pm

I can dig #1

ethics before beauty
honesty before sexiness
kindness before style

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15 May 2013, 5:36 am

Reminds me a little of Charles Bukowski's poetry. I love Bukowski (not in a sexual way :oops: ).

-Bill, otherwise known as Kraichgauer

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21 May 2013, 1:31 pm

3 more poems! (well,I have never been good at math ,this thread is called 3 poems,sorry! )
1.
Rip off your mask!
Feel the wind in your face!
2.
POSTCARD!
Greetings from the Grand Canyon
At the center of my soul.
Yesterday, I stood
On a ridge and screamed
"I am not afraid to die!"
Wish you were here!
3.
I am a ghost
Trapped inside a living skull
Behind my eyes, I pace
Like an actor
During intermission
Is anyone still out there
Wanting to see me again?
4.
LOVE
Imagine me
Then enter
The dream.
5.
I must scream
But
It's socially inappropriate
Please
Accept this in writing.

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21 May 2013, 2:38 pm

Bill,
Ever seen the movie," Barfly"?

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21 May 2013, 3:06 pm

Kraichgauer wrote:

I love Bukowski (not in a sexual way :oops:

I should hope not, as he has been dead a long time! LOL

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21 May 2013, 3:08 pm

I enjoy your writing. Keep it coming!

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21 May 2013, 5:27 pm

wittgenstein wrote:

Bill,
Ever seen the movie," Barfly"?

Not only have I seen it, I own it on DVD.

-Bill, otherwise known as Kraichgauer

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26 May 2013, 11:08 pm

Life is
WAR
Love
WAR
or hate
LIFE!
(of course I am speaking metaphorically )

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26 May 2013, 11:24 pm

:thumright: I can dig.

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27 May 2013, 2:13 am

Dig id up then.
Or E-rupt.

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09 Jun 2013, 6:30 pm

1.
BOB!
and his art
were one.
BOB!
committed suicide.
POOF!
BOB!
and his art
VANISHED!
[ This poem was written after my wife's sister died. She was a classical pianist. When she died my wife said,"when she died, all her knowledge died with her. All those piano lessons died with her]

2.
Reality rocks!
Only head bangers
may apply.
LOVE
Chaos
OR
HATE
LIFE!
3.
UNION
with a universe
that includes
your own DEATH
REQUIRES
a LOVE
for the
SHOCKING!