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mjgirl
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21 Jun 2013, 11:38 am

Hey guys! So I need your guys' advice for this story plan. I was thinking of writing an MJ story, but it's going to revolve around his two daughters (who I made up just for fun!), Megan and Noel. Megan, who's 5 and the oldest, wants to perform a Jackson 5 style concert in honor of the Jackson 5's debut as a group. She also wants to show Michael how well she can perform (she got his singing and dancing skills!) So she rounds up her three cousins and Noel to perform a concert. Megan learns along the way that if you believe, you can do anything. Please let me know what all of you think! :)



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21 Jun 2013, 1:53 pm

Sounds interesting.



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25 Jun 2013, 9:42 am

U can write about anything u want but its important to know what audience ur gonna write for, if u want anyone to read it.

Tips ; should put readers on a roller coaster of emotions, make us cry then laugh then cry some more. (Adventure, love, realisation)

I PERSONALY think this topic is rather lame.



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25 Jun 2013, 9:55 am

Let me guess ... Megan is based on a character named "Mary Sue" ... am I right?



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25 Jun 2013, 12:51 pm

The character Megan is age five? That's pretty young, especially if you want to see the story through her eyes. Perhaps she could be a little older?

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