"The Hidden World" A poem I wrote

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The Hidden World

By Grant Meeson

I am so lost.
Just when I think I’m sure
I have to ask “who am I?” again
Don’t put me down
I don’t know who you are talking to
The canvas is white again
But just to be certain
I’ll crawl here and stare
So why the looks?
I could be your purpose
I just don’t know mine

Oh not again
It’s like a bloody roundabout
Each time a different story
Give me a name
And give me a trait
Kill two birds with one stone
I’ll tell you what it is
To be the last of a kind
Over and over again
Just don’t pretend
Like you know where I’m headed

Time checks its watch
And says “it’s time to move again”
All I can do is sigh
I know this game too well
I could just be stubborn
But the other pieces still move
Enigma my title
Old and worn, barely believable
Like a story

I can sit down
I’ve seen it all before
Tell me when they’ve gone
I don’t need their reason
Until I’ve found mine
Then we’ll compare
The window has seen too many dawns
Now I can’t tell
One from the next
Doubtless its now lies
I don’t know this world

This is not fun
Would you please show me the exit?
The charade just got passé
Like my beating heart
That no one hears but me
But I fall in the trap
Because I now expect
And that’s a weakness
Please don’t be harsh
I’d ignore you
And discover the hidden world

Saw no one responded yet so I felt I had to. this is really good, I like it! Pick up a guitar now and turn it into a song!

This is really good!