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11 Sep 2020, 8:21 pm

Another bit of lyric writing. :study:

A land of winter's snow, a region of summer's heat
The war for justice, win victory or face defeat?
Grey as ashes, blue as the skies
Flames ignited by anger, in a sea of blood the dead will lie

Those cries of battle, the screams of pain
The smell of smoke, our brothers slain
Once we were friends, but now we are foes
In times like these, killing is all we know....

When the flames of the south
Had risen with too much pride
Many had to die

When the ice of the north had thawed
Down came the tears of revenge
They had to avenge

I want to prove my side
Is the only one that's just
You all must be destroyed, my brother, for what you did to us!
I need to end your life
For that is the rule of war
To conquer the enemy, my friend, by any means abhorred!

I'll burn your whole world down!
Everything you love to the ground!
To make you feel the bitter tears that I felt!
In agony you shall drown!
Bringing misery to your town!
You deserve the same pain, as I felt!

When the flames of the south
Had risen with too much pride
Many had to die

When the ice of the north had thawed
Down came the tears of revenge
They had to avenge

White Snow falls on the ash...
Red Blood drips from my gash...
As the army of blue declares victory!

When all that's left are tears...
And in your eyes I see your fear...
How did my brother become my enemy?

Love and Hate
Peace and War
We are enemies no more

North and South
Fire and Ice
A treaty of peace will be made tonight

Snow and Ash
Grey and Blue
We will show onto mercy to you.

Life and Death
Friend and Foe
But this lesson you should know...

Once we were friends, but then we were foes
And In times like that, killing was all we knew....


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11 Sep 2020, 10:52 pm

:o



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12 Sep 2020, 12:17 pm

auntblabby wrote:
:o


No good? :(


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12 Sep 2020, 12:21 pm

DeathEmperor413 wrote:
auntblabby wrote:
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No good? :(

on the contrary, mon frere :) excellent poem, just very dark is all :)



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12 Sep 2020, 12:24 pm

auntblabby wrote:
DeathEmperor413 wrote:
auntblabby wrote:
:o


No good? :(

on the contrary, mon frere :) excellent poem, just very dark is all :)


Ah OK, thank you! :mrgreen:

I like dark. :skull:


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13 Sep 2020, 5:57 am

Did you have a certain music genre or song in mind when you wrote this one? The first thing that jumped into my head was Sabaton, but maybe that's not what you had in mind...?


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13 Sep 2020, 8:08 am

1986 wrote:
Did you have a certain music genre or song in mind when you wrote this one? The first thing that jumped into my head was Sabaton, but maybe that's not what you had in mind...?



I was listening to music by Aviators whiles writing this. I guess that makes it unoriginal? :oops:


It was a combination of these two songs:




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14 Sep 2020, 4:43 am

I don't think so. You added your own personal touch to it, so it's safe to say it's "your work". You should gather together your writings as a short book. Even if you don't get it published in the end, it'll keep you busy for a while which is always good.


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16 Sep 2020, 4:20 pm

I LIKE IT!


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