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Pileated woodpecker
Pileated woodpecker

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Joined: 13 Oct 2014
Age: 25
Gender: Female
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Location: SoCal ~ Los Angeles

11 Dec 2014, 3:25 am

Here is another poem I would love to share with you guys. I wrote it when I was 13.

written by Hilary Renée

Myriad frolic children,
Outside, Outside,
On the pavement,
Playing in the melted puddles-
Of snow with joy and excitement.

The blossoms are visible
Again, again
In the Cherry Blossoms Trees-
That have once been-
Enduring Winter’s dancing moments
Until the very End...

Children are no longer doleful,
But are experiencing ardor,
Because the imperious-
Dire of Winter
Is now no more.

Please share any thoughts and/or comments ! :D

"Human behavior flows from three main sources: desire, emotion, and knowledge." ~ Plato


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Joined: 7 Jan 2011
Age: 31
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Location: Illinois

22 Dec 2014, 2:49 pm

This poem is beautiful. It mixes happiness with isolation. Good job!

"Success is liking yourself, liking what you do, and liking how you do it" - Maya Angelou


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Joined: 4 Feb 2014
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Location: Queens, NYC

22 Dec 2014, 3:19 pm

I would tend to agree: a prodigious work for 13!