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i found these really old verses i wrote when i was a member of a hip hop forum...they were for a collaboration with other members...each verse is a different collab...the topic is being a soldier at war...and the beat i upload already had sound effects on it and i added my own...i did this before but i lost the file so heres a new version...

https://vocaroo.com/1mENNpLHnrAm << beat

Part 1:

wars upon us! the wait is over
the brave are chosen to take control and
aid the soldiers
through the chaos and grenade explosions
our fate is spoken
once the mission is set we gripping the techs
projectiles ripping the flesh
of enemies many scenes and visions of death
soldiers never given a rest
we move with strong forces
our short orders
were to scorch and littler the ground with torn corpses
i saw horrors i didn't believe
vivid as dreams
done to ensure our children and teens
can grow up living in peace
ive lost emotions and my memory's blank
bombing foes till their energy sank
sending missiles through the sides of enemy tanks
war combines hate and tragedy
bullets and shrapnel chasing after me
im facing apathy
but still willing to die for my troops on the battlefield

Part 2:

we march through the mud and the darkness
leaving blood on the carcass
after aiming and placing a slug where the heart is
i put my trust in the heartless
and blow the trench smoke ejects
from roasting flesh bones poke and stretch
through the wounds of broken necks
blood rushes from my open chest
and spreads fast
hindering my movements like bear traps
we bare wrath and share gats
while bazookas bring down pilots in their aircraft
behind enemy lines we trespass
swinging bayonets to chop heads
we drop lead puncturing lungs to stop breath
fighting till our last man is shot dead
i watched scared... medics mending slits
when their men were hit
after we squeezed triggers till we emptied clips
and ill never forget the day i flew home
and my true hope
is that my deeds will never engraved on my tombstone

Part 3:

they fighting for the Holy Quran while holding a bomb
their motiv is wrong
but they've been brainwashed so their soldiers is strong
my focus is gone...soul has been torn
my foe is Allah
he's the reason why my brother's blood aint flowing no more
been chosen for war...but i aint ready to fight
i aint ready for the horror after ending a life
with this tension and fright
i cant rest in the night
paranoia got me wide awake i try to pray
i thankful that im breathing and aint die today
i hide and wait
where his carcass is kept
names of the fallen carved in my flesh
im haunted by death
i listen to the captain as he faces us
"they attacked first cuz they hated us! so rape their sluts
invade and buck...taste their blood
rip their bodies apart with grenades and slugs
you're brave as f**k
so drop the gravity bombs...turn their base to dust!"
i followed his game plan
i must be insane, damn
this is a strange land
the bodies of friends and foes covered by the same sand
im sent home to people cheering with raised hands
im psychotic and delusional
my reflection is familiar but im a changed man

reciting the right line...writing at night time
like when i started typing them nice rhymes
gods blessed this flow thats why my text is dope
haters hated now their neck is broke
make a scene?
you get trapped in nightmares
when i change the dream
i learned the art from sacred beings
im the neo this matrix needs
look...ima dope rapper
my flow gather and fold matter
that hits your body till your bones shatter
im the illest wordsmith their skill is worthless
while im still consistent with the sickest verses

here's a very old verse i found...its about Jesus

https://vocaroo.com/16rAPMUdZUrm << beat

The rusty steel opens my flesh, the pain has captured me
This hate still baffles me
It arose in those I’ve tried to save from agony
Satan laughs at me
As my blood falls on the sand
It pours from my hands, the horror expands
As I realize I’ve failed to transcend the evil forces in man
I refuse to quit
Will they understand the views I give
When they read it in the truest script?
Will they understand the meaning of Judas’ kiss?
Crimson fluid drips
The end is near, death is here
I see friends and peers, denying the truth and kept in fear
My breath I hear
Is as subtle as the wind
They shall understand love, if I suffer for their sins
Nails cutting through my skin
I’m slain with glee, by those I came to free
If I’m your greatest seed, why hast thou forsaken me?
I don’t understand, but I hold my trust in you
Forgive my brothers, they are blind and know not what they do
I overcome this torture with faith that you know best
“Will they understand?” was my only thought before my soul left

yo i still scribble with the pen
these rappers boring not a little bit intense
i wanna see how brittle is your neck
the light of sages hidden in my flesh
im know to drop a text and shine
the reason cuz the best is i
when these letters fly
my defeat can never happen
like a breathless sigh
yeah these letters fly...
like they from a magic school
im the sorcerer
you just got a hat full of rabbit stool
this what rappers do...
and i perfected the art
yes i shine so when im gone
yall are left in the dark

yeah...thats how i put in work and get it done...yall aint on my level

my new rap name is strukchir...and you shall address me as such ...music coming soon...gonna be sick yo!



yo check it...
spitting flamez on the mic
you left dazed when I strike
and the flow cold
like i made it with ice
strukchir...ill puncture
your third eye and cut nerves
brush words
inhale its dust till my lungs hurt
a broken cycle a chosen idol
my flow is vital and close to viral
...broke out the box...
now im open mindful
ayo my flow hit foes like a loaded rifle
lemme lay a text
still end a verse when i say im best
enemies envy plenty...only hatred left