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wittgenstein
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17 Sep 2020, 9:37 am

1.
Old age
Everyone vanished
their replacements do not fool me!
2.
Whenever I understand
my life
I smirk
like a dying man
hearing
his nurse's gossip.
3.
Reality is God's face.
Words are sticky notes
Who can resist?


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17 Sep 2020, 1:56 pm

Fascinating and succinct, I like these a lot. Especially the second one. The nifty thing about short poems is that there’s still plenty to ruminate on.


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