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Shastania
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27 Nov 2008, 10:21 pm

Chained: Remix

For anyone who wants to read it, my comic is now hosted up on Smackjeeves for easy read-ability and navigation.
Please be aware that though it it still a few chapters away, the tone of the story WILL get darker and touch on some controversial topics. There's also a little bit of foul language, just so y'all know.

If in doubt, there's a "Mature Content" warning on the site.

ANNNYWAYS:
I'm not good with summerys so I'll just reiterate what I posted on SJ:

Shastania Musashi is an 18 year old girl with a turbulant past. Spurred to return to the city of her birth following her mother's rapid decline in health, she is forced to confront the demons of a past she's been trying to flee for the last three years...

Currently, it is only 20 pages long but updates will be bi-weekly.

I'd appreciate some feedback as it is actually a remake of a (MUCH) older comic I made previously.
I'm well aware that my art style is a little sloppy in places-I apologize on behalf of my right hand.
Repeative Strain Injuries and tremours aren't exactly easy to work with...

Last but no least, I hope you will enjoy.

If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me either here or on SmackJeeves and I'll do my best to answer promptly.

Thank you.

-your friendly starving artist,

Shasty

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28 Nov 2008, 12:03 am

and Smackjeeves can be found where?...just askin'.

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28 Nov 2008, 11:22 am

the link is the first line: "chained remix"
http://chainedremix.smackjeeves.com/archive/

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28 Nov 2008, 11:53 am

Your art style is very good, better than I was expecting actually. You might want to work on your dialogue. the emotion and meaning are clear, but it comes across as a little clumsy sometimes. I take it you're taking classes in art, yes? Maybe try some creative writing classes if you aren't already

All in all, a good start.

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28 Nov 2008, 11:57 am

Meh ... :shrug:

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29 Nov 2008, 3:06 pm

It was better than I thought it would be. It wasn't ZOMG TEH BEST THING EVAR, but it wasn't as bad as most web comics.

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01 Dec 2008, 2:47 am

I wanna know what happens after the smack!

And the use of the word "rife" wasn't confusing for non-Irish me. Not a thoroughly unknown word.

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01 Dec 2008, 4:28 am

I really enjoyed it and your art is really great.

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