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lost_in_sound
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19 Jan 2009, 8:29 am

I thought I'd write a poem
as a change of pace
But words are scarce
and perhaps sad
It is MLK Day
Surely they miss him
Still, I typed, the computer's buzz all of a sudden audible
for the first time ever, it seemed
And I wondered what else I'd been ignoring

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19 Jan 2009, 11:03 am

Welcome Aboard! Please have a seat, and someone else will be with you shortly.

( Can you write poetry with metre and rhyme? )


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19 Jan 2009, 1:27 pm

that is really good! :)


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19 Jan 2009, 5:01 pm

Thanks for the welcome Fnord, and for the compliment musicislife

:)

I usually don't write poetry, per se; mostly song lyrics, which have meter and rhyme (for the most part). It can be somewhat constricting though.



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20 Jan 2009, 12:16 am

MLK
Went away
With a bullet made of lead.
Like Lincoln and like JFK
The good are soon made dead.
No one murdered Hitler.
Stalin died in bed.
Mao Lived a long, long life
And killed many that he led.
Jesus Christ was nailed to death
Because he preached of peace.
The good guys never seem to last.
Will murder never cease?



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20 Jan 2009, 7:28 am

i like it



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20 Jan 2009, 10:55 pm

Hope and Change
Tall Man in a House of White
Brighter days


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