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SpongeBobRocksMao
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24 Mar 2009, 4:17 pm

My latest fanfic. :) It got split in 2 parts and it contains a lot of fan-made characters.

Part 1 - http://pineapplehouse.bravehost.com/pab ... rets1.html
Part 2 - http://pineapplehouse.bravehost.com/pab ... rets2.html


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25 Mar 2009, 8:39 am

Congratulations. Your craptastic fan fiction has ruined writing scripts for me.

Seriously, take a creative writing class. It would help a LOT.


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25 Mar 2009, 12:49 pm

Delirium wrote:
Congratulations. Your craptastic fan fiction has ruined writing scripts for me.

Seriously, take a creative writing class. It would help a LOT.

I don't get it. You tell me to just give the links, and I do but you still complain.

Sorry, I'm just sensitive to criticism sometimes.


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26 Mar 2009, 8:02 am

SpongeBobRocksMao wrote:
Delirium wrote:
Congratulations. Your craptastic fan fiction has ruined writing scripts for me.

Seriously, take a creative writing class. It would help a LOT.

I don't get it. You tell me to just give the links, and I do but you still complain.

Sorry, I'm just sensitive to criticism sometimes.


I was saying that you need some improvement in your writing.

Also, I can't stand Spongebob Squarepants, but I do like giving criticism and suggestions. I think that you would benefit greatly from a creative writing course.


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