black_legion wrote:
erm, thanks, i wrote this at like half one in the morning, and i just wanted to get it done, and i'm not completely illiterate, i do have a a to d grade qualification in literacy
I wasn't saying you're illiterate. No illiterate could have written this. It does seem, though, that in today's education punctuation and grammar are given less attention than they used to. And while this may be OK for shorter texts (emails, text messages, and similar stuff), it makes longer texts (such as yours) barely readable sometimes.
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Dabey müssen wir nichts seyn, sondern alles werden wollen, und besonders nicht öffter stille stehen und ruhen, als die Nothdurfft eines müden Geistes und Körpers erfordert. - Goethe