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14 Sep 2012, 1:02 am
wtfid2 wrote:
im stealing your profile headline 
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
wtfid2, You have good looks but as you said, you are ignoring girls that you could be practising your game on. I don't know if you are seeking a bikini model or something but you need to just get in there and practice game. I saw your profile and it is too long winded plus the photos could be touched up definitely. You look like a decent looking guy but I'll be honest here.
The photos - You look like just woke up in the photos, mess your hair up, put on a suit or base yourself on someone. Personally I take my style from films like Ocean's eleven and pick a celebrity hairstyle, take into the barbers and get it cut like a celebrity.
Profile is too long, you list adjectives such as honesty and compassion, that can come across as pretentious and it's not something that is expressed by words. There are hundreds of profiles of men describing themselves in adjectives or writing profiles like they are job applications. Stand out and try to convey a sense of fun in your profile. If you were a boss and you got a hundred CV applicants, would you look for the ones that spoke action or just spoke on and on without proving it? the point is that you can post traits such as honesty but it doesn't really prove anything and that's why you keep getting the desperate ones. Speak action in your profile, convey is the right word, convey a sense of fun, wittiness and humour.
Some of the things come across as too generic like listing your computer or GPS, you need to make your profile open so it leaves mystery, so it doesn't lay all the cards on the table yet still will convey a sense of fun. You need to read it back and think to yourself "Am I someone I would like to hang out with?" or "Am I someone I would like to get to know better?".
Quote:
Two US Profiles that work.
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
Here's two examples of a couple of profiles that work but they are done in more of an American style, try writing something similar but use things that will relate to young American girls and keep the sense of silliness and humour. Write it to things that actually relate to you but in your own style so it doesn't look like you are a copy pasta.
14 Sep 2012, 1:07 am
14 Sep 2012, 1:14 am
Wolfheart wrote:
wtfid2 wrote:
im stealing your profile headline
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
wtfid2, You have good looks but as you said, you are ignoring girls that you could be practising your game on. I don't know if you are seeking a bikini model or something but you need to just get in there and practice game. I saw your profile and it is too long winded plus the photos could be touched up definitely. You look like a decent looking guy but I'll be honest here.
The photos - You look like just woke up in the photos, mess your hair up, put on a suit or base yourself on someone. Personally I take my style from films like Ocean's eleven and pick a celebrity hairstyle, take into the barbers and get it cut like a celebrity.
Profile is too long, you list adjectives such as honesty and compassion, that can come across as pretentious and it's not something that is expressed by words. There are hundreds of profiles of men describing themselves in adjectives or writing profiles like they are job applications. Stand out and try to convey a sense of fun in your profile. If you were a boss and you got a hundred CV applicants, would you look for the ones that spoke action or just spoke on and on without proving it? the point is that you can post traits such as honesty but it doesn't really prove anything and that's why you keep getting the desperate ones. Speak action in your profile, convey is the right word, convey a sense of fun, wittiness and humour.
Some of the things come across as too generic like listing your computer or GPS, you need to make your profile open so it leaves mystery, so it doesn't lay all the cards on the table yet still will convey a sense of fun. You need to read it back and think to yourself "Am I someone I would like to hang out with?" or "Am I someone I would like to get to know better?".
Quote:
Two US Profiles that work.
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
Here's two examples of a couple of profiles that work but they are done in more of an American style, try writing something similar but use things that will relate to young American girls and keep the sense of silliness and humour. Write it to things that actually relate to you but in your own style so it doesn't look like you are a copy pasta.
As for suits I don;t own any lol..I';m a bum of a guy..a lol. I try to dress ina way that makes me feel confident though. You won;t see me in goth clothes lol
My teeth need some work though so im going to start crest strips this week....they re a little too yellow for my liking 0.o
14 Sep 2012, 1:17 am
Wolfheart wrote:
wtfid2 wrote:
im stealing your profile headline
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
wtfid2, You have good looks but as you said, you are ignoring girls that you could be practising your game on. I don't know if you are seeking a bikini model or something but you need to just get in there and practice game. I saw your profile and it is too long winded plus the photos could be touched up definitely. You look like a decent looking guy but I'll be honest here.
The photos - You look like just woke up in the photos, mess your hair up, put on a suit or base yourself on someone. Personally I take my style from films like Ocean's eleven and pick a celebrity hairstyle, take into the barbers and get it cut like a celebrity.
Profile is too long, you list adjectives such as honesty and compassion, that can come across as pretentious and it's not something that is expressed by words. There are hundreds of profiles of men describing themselves in adjectives or writing profiles like they are job applications. Stand out and try to convey a sense of fun in your profile. If you were a boss and you got a hundred CV applicants, would you look for the ones that spoke action or just spoke on and on without proving it? the point is that you can post traits such as honesty but it doesn't really prove anything and that's why you keep getting the desperate ones. Speak action in your profile, convey is the right word, convey a sense of fun, wittiness and humour.
Some of the things come across as too generic like listing your computer or GPS, you need to make your profile open so it leaves mystery, so it doesn't lay all the cards on the table yet still will convey a sense of fun. You need to read it back and think to yourself "Am I someone I would like to hang out with?" or "Am I someone I would like to get to know better?".
Quote:
Two US Profiles that work.
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
Here's two examples of a couple of profiles that work but they are done in more of an American style, try writing something similar but use things that will relate to young American girls and keep the sense of silliness and humour. Write it to things that actually relate to you but in your own style so it doesn't look like you are a copy pasta.
14 Sep 2012, 1:48 am
wtfid2 wrote:
Wolfheart wrote:
wtfid2 wrote:
im stealing your profile headline
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
btw chick on top left do want.
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=22270944
wtfid2, You have good looks but as you said, you are ignoring girls that you could be practising your game on. I don't know if you are seeking a bikini model or something but you need to just get in there and practice game. I saw your profile and it is too long winded plus the photos could be touched up definitely. You look like a decent looking guy but I'll be honest here.
The photos - You look like just woke up in the photos, mess your hair up, put on a suit or base yourself on someone. Personally I take my style from films like Ocean's eleven and pick a celebrity hairstyle, take into the barbers and get it cut like a celebrity.
Profile is too long, you list adjectives such as honesty and compassion, that can come across as pretentious and it's not something that is expressed by words. There are hundreds of profiles of men describing themselves in adjectives or writing profiles like they are job applications. Stand out and try to convey a sense of fun in your profile. If you were a boss and you got a hundred CV applicants, would you look for the ones that spoke action or just spoke on and on without proving it? the point is that you can post traits such as honesty but it doesn't really prove anything and that's why you keep getting the desperate ones. Speak action in your profile, convey is the right word, convey a sense of fun, wittiness and humour.
Some of the things come across as too generic like listing your computer or GPS, you need to make your profile open so it leaves mystery, so it doesn't lay all the cards on the table yet still will convey a sense of fun. You need to read it back and think to yourself "Am I someone I would like to hang out with?" or "Am I someone I would like to get to know better?".
Quote:
Two US Profiles that work.
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
I lost a needle in a hay stack once and found it. When I go to Wendy's, the entire menu changes to 99 cents. My carpet vacuums itself. Everyday is my lucky day. I'm 6'1" on paper but 6'10" when you tickle me. I have more fun then my roommate, except when he is having a LOT of fun. When you meet me the pleasure will be all yours. I hate fantasies because they always come true. I don't pay attention to fashion because it is always a step behind. I once climbed Mount Everest, Mount Kilamanjaro, and K-2 using only one bottle of oxygen and a sack of trail mix."
Another good example.
I party like its 1999. i am Americas next top model. i never perspire. my strengths outweigh my weaknesses. i am constantly caller number 9 and win tickets to all the best shows. i bat 400. i have made extraordinary four course meals using only a spatula and a toaster oven. im a stellar hugger and a world class cuddler. i dance with the stars. i consistently beat Chuck Norris in arm-wrestling. i once read paradise lost, the odyssey and war & peace all in one day and still had time to refurbish an entire dining room that evening. i shower daily. critics worldwide swoon over my original line of corduroy evening wear. sushi is my favourite food group. i bake 30 minute brownies in 20 minutes flat. moms love me and children wanna be me. i know the exact location of every item in the supermarket. i always pick the most fullest and symmetrical Christmas trees. on Wednesdays, after practice, i repair electrical appliances free of charge. i eat soup, i'm a go-getta. i sleep once a day. basically...i rock
Here's two examples of a couple of profiles that work but they are done in more of an American style, try writing something similar but use things that will relate to young American girls and keep the sense of silliness and humour. Write it to things that actually relate to you but in your own style so it doesn't look like you are a copy pasta.
As for suits I don;t own any lol..I';m a bum of a guy..a lol. I try to dress ina way that makes me feel confident though. You won;t see me in goth clothes lol
My teeth need some work though so im going to start crest strips this week....they re a little too yellow for my liking 0.o
True, you need to assess the type of girls that are messaging you and ask yourself why the pretty ones are flaking. Real game is better than online game,you can learn a lot more from it and get a more direct result. There are advantages to online as well and it will improve your text game which is important since many girls use text, Skype or Facebook as a form of communication now. There are flakes online that use the dating websites for attention or ego stroking, that's just the way it is.
As for the suits, it's not even a suit that is needed. Finding something that works for you is good, you could even wear a decent leather jacket and jeans and start with one outfit that portrays or make you feel confident.
A piece of advice I have learned: Don't put all your cards on the table, in other words don't become desperate for the girls and let them know, women will always try to test you and that's something you need to look out for. Have you ever seen how a cat chases a thread of string until it receives the ball of string only to simply play with it before walking away? You need to be the never ending piece of string, you need to keep women on their toes.
14 Sep 2012, 2:02 am
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