I don't know how I want to have my story

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I'm trying to create a fictional family but I can't think of which is best to go for out of these two ideas:-

1. The mother's young 18-year-old brother lives with her and her 3 children; a brainy but depressed 11-year-old girl, a 9-year-old boy with ADD but is popular at school, and a 7-year-old girl with non-verbal autism.

2. The mother has an 18-year-old son who is immature for his age, the brainy girl and the ADD boy are 10-year-old twins, and the non-verbal autistic child is a 7-year-old boy.

I don't want to mix the scenarios, I want either one or the other. But I just can't make my mind up which one to write about. The first one seems more interesting but I'll have to think of a reason why the 18-year-old uncle lives with them and what happened to their mum and dad (the grandparents).
The 3 kid's mum is single but they see their dad sometimes, who is a drunken hillbilly.

Which one sounds better, number 1 or number 2?

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It depends who your main characters will be, and what the conflict or problem will involve. Try not to have too many characters in one household because it will be hard to bring them all to life with a backstory and relevance. Choose your protagonist and antagonist and go from there (person vs person, person vs nature, person vs self, etc).

Also what POV will you use?

Well I was thinking more of doing substories, kind of like a series, rather than one whole story with a fixed plot.

It will probably be third person.

I'm writing this for fun (as a distraction from the world crisis), not intending to be published. But I still want it to make sense, as logic plays an important part when I write stories!

I like this idea.

That sounds fun! It reminds me of a TV show called Life In Pieces. It was all 10-15 minute episodes.

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Keep it simple; no more than 1 primary character (the protagonist) and 2 or 3 secondary characters (the kids), otherwise you may lose track of who's who and who does what.

Example: Harry Potter was the primary protagonist, with Hermoine and Ron as the secondaries, with everybody else providing motivation and/or information for Harry & Friends to act upon.