Erm , guy's : You know when you talk to an MP they've got a zillion things going through their heads already. If you put anything in front of them they want to see it in its simplest most comprehensible form. Do this and you get their attention, if they see straight away there is some political collateral in it for them.
So what exactly do you want your political representatives to do?
Can you give a condensed outline , say a series of bullet points, in order of significance?