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25 Apr 2011, 4:15 am

At a hard plastic chair.
In a darkened college room.
(warm heater)
I am the only one here.
It occurs to me how isolated I am from other people.
Just me here and nobody.
Me and nobody.
We make a good partnership.
I can delude myself and nobody can accompany me.
I can feel gut wrenching depression, and nobody can make me happy again.
I can sit quietly and nobody can love me.

Maybe I should marry nobody.
We could have a long and fruitful life together living in an empty house.
Nobody would give my life meaning and purpose

I am starting to love nobody.
I see myself reflected in nobody.
(In fact, as we emulate each other more and more closely)
I am starting to become nobody.

If I am nobody and nobody loves me then nobody could be everything I desire in this world.
I’m smiling and sitting on a partially squashed jumper as I sigh over nobody.
I should go to bed and dream about nobody.
Goodnight nobody.


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25 Apr 2011, 5:14 am

That's a good poem. I've felt like that before too.


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25 Apr 2011, 6:14 am

Thanks :). I've written a lot of poems (several hundred), and I'm currently trying to compile them into a manuscript for a book. Whether it'll ever get published, I do not know... but it's a nice concept.


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25 Apr 2011, 8:53 am

sunshower wrote:
At a hard plastic chair.
In a darkened college room.
(warm heater)
I am the only one here.
It occurs to me how isolated I am from other people.
Just me here and nobody.
Me and nobody.
We make a good partnership.
I can delude myself and nobody can accompany me.
I can feel gut wrenching depression, and nobody can make me happy again.
I can sit quietly and nobody can love me.

Maybe I should marry nobody.
We could have a long and fruitful life together living in an empty house.
Nobody would give my life meaning and purpose

I am starting to love nobody.
I see myself reflected in nobody.
(In fact, as we emulate each other more and more closely)
I am starting to become nobody.

If I am nobody and nobody loves me then nobody could be everything I desire in this world.
I’m smiling and sitting on a partially squashed jumper as I sigh over nobody.
I should go to bed and dream about nobody.
Goodnight nobody.


Who hasnt been here?
I know i have



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25 Apr 2011, 2:47 pm

I like the symbolism and emotion it creates :) Though dark and saddening, the narrator gives me the impression that they are happy being alone.
You could always try self-publishing if you can't do traditonal publication.



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25 Apr 2011, 2:48 pm

I like the symbolism and emotion it creates :) Though dark and saddening, the narrator gives me the impression that they are happy being alone.
You could always try self-publishing if you can't do traditonal publication.



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25 Apr 2011, 2:50 pm

I like the symbolism and emotion it creates :) Though dark and saddening, the narrator gives me the impression that they are happy being alone.
You could always try self-publishing if you can't do traditonal publication.



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26 Apr 2011, 3:53 am

Thanks Josh :). I know some professional writers who could help me out, but at the moment it's more a matter of organizing, culling, and going through my archives too see if I can come up with a final manuscript that I feel would be worthy of publication. If I published it I probably would self- publish because I don't think I'd be doing it for profit, as poetry books generally don't sell unless you're one of the most successful poets in the world.


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26 Apr 2011, 9:33 am

Yeah, it's hard to sell poetry these days :/ Sorry for the double post, WP was having heavy traffic at the time.