...so I figured I'd post it here. 'tis a dark and somewhat nonsensical MLP fanfic, and I'm looking for any honest opinions or criticisms.
What I already know I need to work on:
Flow
Grammar
Skipped words
Warning: It's not super gory by any means, but there IS death.
And Hell Will Follow Me
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A shot gun blast into the face of deceit
You'll gain your just reward.
We'll not rest until the purge is complete
You will reap what you've sown.
29 May 2012, 11:53 pm
