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27 Aug 2014, 5:57 pm

Leave me alone because alone im beautiful
Leave me alone so i dont have to be seen by you
Leave me alone so i dont have to be heard by you
Alone im beautiful
I wish you'd know

Whats inside me you will never know
So dont bother getting close
Leave me alone, ontouched
Because alone im beautiful
I wish you'd only know

What my soul looks like, i'm just like you
But you won't see me, not in this life
So please leave me alone
Let me be beautiful



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27 Aug 2014, 6:23 pm

What does that mean?
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27 Aug 2014, 10:01 pm

That's a wonderful poem. It gives me an insight of your world. :)


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03 Sep 2014, 12:40 am

I like it and understand it in a way I can't explain.



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03 Sep 2014, 4:26 am

Nice poem. I hope you keep writing more poems.



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03 Sep 2014, 4:33 am

It means she really likes bieng alone. It brings out the best in her. With others, not so much.

I relate so I do kind of "know".


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05 Sep 2014, 12:35 am

So nice.


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05 Sep 2014, 4:56 pm

I could say that this poem is one of the most "evident" poems I've ever read.



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07 Sep 2014, 11:19 pm

Would make for some good grunge rock lyrics! I love it.



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08 Sep 2014, 12:48 am

This poem is beautiful. Well done! :)


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13 Sep 2014, 10:13 pm

Quote:
I like it...
Nice poem.
So nice.
I love it.
This poem is beautiful.


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13 Sep 2014, 11:26 pm

YourMum wrote:
Quote:
I like it...
Nice poem.
So nice.
I love it.
This poem is beautiful.


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We're only being honest.


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