ltcvnzl wrote:
don't be very picky with the way I write, I just read it and feel embarrassed because it's quite bad. I said "I felt disappointed because I was disappointed". I need to improve my english but most of time I'm just lazy and just hope people will understand me.
I wasn't criticizing the way you write. It's a trend I've noticed for quite some time, particularly worrisome when they try to define crimes by the alleged victim's feelings.
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23 Jul 2018, 8:36 pm
