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DominictheStampede
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05 May 2012, 2:23 pm

My writing usually has ordinary people encounter extraordinary things or worlds. There is romance in some of my writing and a little bit of tragedy.



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05 May 2012, 2:45 pm

When I'm writing stories about my invented world, I'm influenced by the following things:
I'm influenced by the world history (in the world historie are many inspiring things and strange interesting situations), fantasy books (I dislike much magic, but a little bit of magic is necessary, so I used some magic things), my dreams, many other things (For example when I saw something strange or interesting landscapes).
I#m using the standard fantasy races and try to invent new ones but I'm focussed on humans.
I had problems with religions and the inner feelings of my characters.
Than I'm mixing my ideas and connected it with older ideas.

But I think that there are not so many persons who would be interested in my writings.



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05 May 2012, 3:38 pm

Aelfwine wrote:
But I think that there are not so many persons who would be interested in my writings.



I'd be interested in what you write :) Send me some of your work via PM or post it in the writing showcase thread, I'd love to read it!



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05 May 2012, 5:11 pm

- When writing, I'm unusually cynical, much more so than in real life. One thing I've caught myself doing very often is adding a cynical or insulting sidenote. Some translated examples:

I wrote:
[Excerpt from an essay about a very unintelligent Minister of Education:] "A book could be written about her disastrous policies so far, but she would not be able to read it."
[Excerpt from a fictional letter to a former premier who ruined our economy:] "You're saying we need to do what you say to keep up with China, but looking at our marathons, we can't even keep up with Ethiopia."
[Excerpt from a short story about an incompetent, debaucherous king:] "The noblemen in the room applauded mindlessly, no doubt putting the rest of their efforts into thinking of ways to murder him."


- Usually, my writings have something to do with power, politics or religion, and a very bleak way of combining those:

Here's something I made up. I wrote:
"Not even God himself could have saved the miserable structure that once stood out like a rusty giant over what was once the wealthiest city in the known world. As the priest stood over the decaying corpse of Prince Alfred, whose eyes were beginning to rot and sink into their sockets, the ceiling came down. All inside were killed by debris. After that, what remained of the cathedral was ignored out of shame."


- Sometimes, the main character is torn between what he feels is right and what he's expected to do.

Here's a translation from something I wrote in Dutch a few years ago. I wrote:
"The moment President Fereine entered the room, even the most hardened and experienced ministers remained completely quiet. Charles noticed that he was beginning to sweat, and the minister sitting next to him, Hiëronymus Alfonse, was biting his lip. "Listen, we have a problem," said President Fereine bluntly. Almost as if there was an agreement, everyone remained eerily quiet.

"If you don't want to tell me what you think is the problem," she said bitterly, staring madly at Charles, "I'll tell it." Charles felt very uncomfortable.
"If I knew-" he tried to say, but she interrupted him. Almost spitting out the whisky she was drinking, she lashed out at him. "It's that senile idiot right next to you, Charles. You know he was appointed on your request, and you know he's been ruining it for several months now. God, it's like I'm talking to a group of deaf ret*ds."

For a moment, Charles stared at the glass of water in front of him. He had expected her to blame him, but he had not expected her to blame his best friend for 'destructive policies' she had personally designed.


I'm quite interested in anyone's stories if they want to tell me about them. I'll be going through that one thread that seems to have some short ones soon.



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06 May 2012, 4:36 am

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I'd be interested in what you write Smile Send me some of your work via PM or post it in the writing showcase thread, I'd love to read it!


Good, but the problem is, that I write mostly in my native language (German). But I could try to write in English and post it.



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06 May 2012, 5:46 am

Usually things like...
-Betrayal
-Reoccuring characters
-Crossovers
-Certain locations
-And flashbacks



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06 May 2012, 9:48 am

Aelfwine wrote:
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I'd be interested in what you write Smile Send me some of your work via PM or post it in the writing showcase thread, I'd love to read it!


Good, but the problem is, that I write mostly in my native language (German). But I could try to write in English and post it.



I don't mean to sound patronising but please don't do anything that you would find difficult or frustrating. If you can write your stories in English and post them, great, if not, don't worry about it.



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06 May 2012, 12:48 pm

I want to try to write it in English.
Also, I had no problems when I made some mistakes, but other persons who would read it.



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06 May 2012, 2:27 pm

Ok, that's cool. I'd be more than happy to read your writing if you typed it out.



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07 May 2012, 5:40 pm

For me it's single fathers, characters who find themselves alone, unrequited love, God has a sense of humor, and/or the occasional "didn't really think that all the way through"

Terry Pratchett is a author I draw inspiration from.

"What is a tourist?"
"I think it means idiot"
From the color of magic by Terry pratchett



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08 May 2012, 2:56 am

My stories generally

- had people escaping from something
- were deliberately 'surreal', wherein things were 'nonsensical' (whatever that means) yet sensationally enjoyable.. unique shapes, metaphors, etc
- were at least a little sarcastic/ironic/?
- didn't really have a 'plot'.. whatever that is

Hardly anyone liked them :)



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08 May 2012, 2:58 am

I'm not sure why I posted a :) in there.. it's more of a :( or a :| but. I tried to do something

Keep in mind, if you try to emulate me, you will probably find that you confuse people, at best, or more likely, simply inspire people to have no response whatsoever.

So it goes in this rather dull 'reality' known as 'earth'



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08 May 2012, 3:01 am

Ohh. So ultimately I wondered why I was trying to impress anyone at all with anything, writing or whatever. And I couldn't and still can't come up with a satisfying answer. There's the idea of getting money so that I continue doing the few things I do enjoy, but I've come to realize that these things I do enjoy always involve some sort of escape from actual life, whether it be through happy color land fantasy, or mass slaughterfests, or whatever. At some point, imagining the escape becomes not enough, and I must actually escape. And I am only writing this very post because I am still somehow insecure, but with every post and every day and every thought I become less insecure..

I can't miss me, don't I see? Almost..



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08 May 2012, 3:44 am

mglosenger wrote:
My stories generally

- had people escaping from something
- were deliberately 'surreal', wherein things were 'nonsensical' (whatever that means) yet sensationally enjoyable.. unique shapes, metaphors, etc
- were at least a little sarcastic/ironic/?
- didn't really have a 'plot'.. whatever that is

Hardly anyone liked them :)


I've read some really memorable horror fiction years ago that had surreal, nonsensical story lines and imagery. I've thought about trying something out like that, but my fiction so far have had direct story lines, and are set in the everyday world.

-Bill, otherwise known as Kraichgauer



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12 May 2012, 3:33 am

Most of my writings include themes about screwed up governments, civil wars, victorian-modern settings, the unknown, or it has to be about Rock music and the current world. A lot of the inspiration I gather is from my history classes and there is always some form of massive bloodbath. Most of my Main characters are either girls or socially awkward guys.

Also, I tend to specify my characters' ethnicities. Also, there tend to be a lot more White/Asian chracters than any other ethnicity

There's also my tendancy to make the mothers either aloof, abandoning or something along the lines of not being there or being mentally unable to take care of their children. The fathers are usually much more motherly than they should be, and they are usually pretty badass in terms of their past before becoming a father.

The backstories are detailed... way too detailed, whereas my normal writing is much too vague. I feel like if I specified the story even more, I would turn it into another twilight.

In the Background, you find random spontaneous occurences that don't seem to go along with the story, but make sense in my own head.



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12 May 2012, 3:49 am

That sounds interesting GrantingtheRant. I think history is a great inspiration.
Could you post one of your stories or a part of it in the writing showcase thread?
I'd like to read it.
Some time ago I had a similar idea.
Our world with the technology of the years between 1900-1930, but every nation that could be independent is independent.
Also minorities are bigger than normal and there are also much civil-wars (comunism, democracy, monarchy, anarchism...) , and each nation is in war with each other and the economy collapses.