new poem please read

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hey just felt like putting this up here hope any who read it enjoys it. it is kind of dark tho.


The darkness
This felling from with in,
This dream that was life,
The only thought left now is of the darkness.

The final days here on this planet.
This darkness draws in
Only deaths light beckon to me.
Daring me end it all.
To give in
And give up on life.
A life of constant pain and
over welling pressure.
Pressure to fit in
To give up on my self
To percent a false happiness
Instead of this emptiness which fills me
Bot sure if I can keep this up for much longer
This false life.

No longer can cope with this life
Soon death and I may meat
And the false hope of this life will be at an end.

No longer human
Now just a walking shell.

Very expressive, very sad.

Yeah, very sad. But boy, can I relate!

Very depressing, but a good read.

very depressing to read.

It was a good read. Thanks.

thank for the comment. this is easly the darkest of my poems so far in a way it nice know that i'm not the only one one who been in this frame of mind.