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fibonaccispiral777
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29 Aug 2014, 4:17 pm

Hi, this is a song I recently wrote called Seal Our Fate. It is currently being expanded as a song and a better bridge is being implemented but this is rough live draft of the song. It is quite a funky song with a melancholic tinge to it. I hope you all enjoy it and it is not too bad. Here is the link-

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79RYMUxG3to

Hope you enjoy! Thanks! :)



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31 Aug 2014, 9:12 am

Not bad at all mate :) I quite like the nasal quality of your voice reminds me a little of Van Morrison in that respect. Melody is well drawn too. My only 2 suggestions would be to maybe add some more harmonic colour and some more varied textures (fingerpicking or arpegg figures). By that I mean perhaps take an unusual modulation or use a sidestepped passing chord.

Otherwise its nice!


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